picowrimo | Day 23 (Team July)

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Here's today's prompt for your writing updates and for any extracts, thoughts, or comments you might have.

Keep the fires burning! :)

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Poor Vila! *shakes head* Like a male Cassandra, isn't he?

He is a bit!

And your icon redefines "adorable"!

Oh Vila. Here the woman thinks she's going to get a proposition, and she gets a warning instead :)

Keep going, you'll make the target yet!

Actually the fact that he behaved quite differently most mos guys--and was right--will impress her.

Maybe she'll keep the warning in the back of her mind even if she brushed Vila off. Of course, he probably wouldn't know if his warning helped then.

Oh, he'll know! The warning works and she remembers the name of his ship. :-)

That's much more satisfying then!

Glad you're back on target. I do like your Vila in this story.

Thanks! I do plan to finish this thing before the end of the year. :-)

There's November Pico to come :)

You are making great progress! :)

Good snippet

Thanks! I really didn't think I would come back from all the delays.

Great progress again.