ext_369666 ([identity profile] jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo 2012-11-01 10:14 pm (UTC)

Well done on fixing the plot hole and finding things to delete!

Great scene - I love the misunderstanding and the way Sybil explains in such a roundabout way.

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