http://saki101.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] saki101.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo 2012-11-01 10:55 pm (UTC)

Possibly the transition would be less surprising if the earlier part of the conversation had been there, too.

Initially, that flashback was longer, but I think now I'll split it up between another or maybe two other scenes. (Or not, of course ;-))

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