Picowrimo - Day 1

[ideealisme.livejournal.com]

At twenty past midnight local time!

Greetings all. You know what to do. You know where to do it. Go! :)

Comments

[six-old-cars.livejournal.com]

I like your Gilli :)

One small further tweak I would add to the ones justice_turtle gave: the phrase "I can as well act as one" would be more natural as "I may as well..." (and since I can't even think of the phrase for native-speaker usage that isn't obvious from the rules of the language, and I AM a native speaker, I think you're doing superbly to get so close to those things I can't think of the word for)

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I try my best, but English isn't an easy language to conquer. Neither German nor Russian nor the lkittle French I ever had was this difficult.