My pico is a continuation of a current project, chapter 4 onwards. But I've just added an extra 300 word scene in chapter 1. Still, as there's no rules to pico, that takes me to over 36%.
But... day 11, so should be 36.7% through, so looks like I should do a few more hundred words.
The extra scene is in response to critical feedback in QWIL last Thursday ... had to get it out of my mind before I could continue with chapter 4.
There was now a tightness in her chest. Come on girl! He only grabbed your arm. She shook her arm in disgust; she needed to wash off the memory. I was always the tough one. She laughed bitterly. His grip had been so strong. Her shoulder still hurt. But why had he released her? She felt a hand on her shoulder and flinched, but it was only Joile again. “We should get to the pavilion.” Good old Joile. Steadfast and patient.
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But... day 11, so should be 36.7% through, so looks like I should do a few more hundred words.
The extra scene is in response to critical feedback in QWIL last Thursday ... had to get it out of my mind before I could continue with chapter 4.
There was now a tightness in her chest. Come on girl! He only grabbed your arm. She shook her arm in disgust; she needed to wash off the memory.
I was always the tough one. She laughed bitterly. His grip had been so strong. Her shoulder still hurt. But why had he released her?
She felt a hand on her shoulder and flinched, but it was only Joile again. “We should get to the pavilion.” Good old Joile. Steadfast and patient.