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http://elmey.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] elmey.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo2014-11-21 10:01 pm
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Pico Day 22

Here's today's post for your snippets, comments, thoughts.
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[identity profile] elmey.livejournal.com 2014-11-23 03:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the way you're able to show the relationship between Scryloc and Melyd with just a few brushstrokes, the way her hand falls back down to her side, and the way he won't brush against her--compared to his ease with the child.

[identity profile] saki101.livejournal.com 2014-11-23 10:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I was worried about saccharine there.
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[identity profile] elmey.livejournal.com 2014-11-23 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Not saccharine yet :) it makes everyone very human right now.
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