Pico day 9

[el-staplador.livejournal.com]

Here is the post for any comments, snippets or thoughts.

May the magic be with us all!

Comments

[saki101.livejournal.com]

A little over an hour's work. Not a lot of words, but some, and more thinking about backstory. Meanwhile, in the Jag:

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The car door slammed. Alistair could hear the steel tips of Anthea’s heels on the pavement for a few steps, then the revolving doors swirled and she was gone.

“Let’s hope Round Two is more productive.” Alistair turned his attention back to the black blade of his knife, finished cleaning it and folded it into its handle. “I’ve never used this on fish before,” he said.

[elmey.livejournal.com]

That last statement certainly leads to some unsettling thoughts! I have a feeling you're coming up with a very interesting backstory.

[saki101.livejournal.com]

Alistair does follow a certain profession...

[akane42me.livejournal.com]

Here's to productive thinking about backstory - I know you'll come up with something wonderful, as usual:)

And here's to Round Two!

[saki101.livejournal.com]

Fingers crossed!

To Round Two!!!

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Anthea's heels with steel tips make so much sense!

I still believe that Mycroft's umbrella has a sword hidden in it. Or something.

[saki101.livejournal.com]

Absolutely. Maybe he has different ones, some with rapiers, some with guns, lasers, poison darts. It's definitely not merely an umbrella.

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

An intriguing comment from Alistair there.

[saki101.livejournal.com]

It's good that Red can tell no tales.

[el-staplador.livejournal.com]

That's a striking exit from Anthea - I love the way you convey the idea of her presence through sound and motion.

[saki101.livejournal.com]

:-D She's definitely a person to be approached with caution.

[sallymn.livejournal.com]

An hour is good, getting a routine is good :)

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Good progress!

Intriguing!

[saki101.livejournal.com]

Slowly, slowly, it's coming together.