Pico day 13

[el-staplador.livejournal.com]

I'm away with work for the next couple of days. There is alleged to be wi-fi, but if I fail to get the posts up within a reasonable time please do someone feel free to step in.

Here is the post for any comments, snippets or thoughts.

May the magic be with us all!

Comments

[saki101.livejournal.com]

I went off and wrote a few paragraphs today about John brushing up his draughtsmanship because he saw how impressed Sherlock seemed with Amar's ability to draw the suspect. I don't particularly have any place for that in this story!

I did also revise the complete, plot-moving scene from the other day. Deleted some stuff, swapped a few words around. So, a little snip of that ~

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“Yes, of course,” Mr Amar said, gesturing to the seats. “I’m shocked, but I suppose I shouldn’t be.” He ran a hand through his hair. “I’ll only be a moment.”

“Forgery,” John murmured, when Amar had left the room.

“Fingerprints,” Sherlock replied.

[espresso-addict.livejournal.com]

Deletion totally counts as progress! John & Sherlock are continuing their double act nicely.

[akane42me.livejournal.com]

A few paragraphs! Very good progress! And it sounds like some good revision work, too. So - another good pico day, Saki!

John: "Forgery."
Sherlock: "Fingerprints."

Perfect sideways conversation:)

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Great work there.

[sallymn.livejournal.com]

Lovely 'great minds thinking alike' in a minimum of words there :)

[elmey.livejournal.com]

It may not have a place in the story, but the idea is entertaining!

I really like these conversations where we have to follow Sherlock's buzzing ideas.

[saki101.livejournal.com]

I have to get back to Mycroft now. I must, I must!

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Progress for them and you.

[saki101.livejournal.com]

It was one of those nice scenes when the characters were talking to me!