Pico day 22

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Here is the post for any comments, snippets or thoughts.

May the magic be with us all!

Comments

RE: Still on with Terminus

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Ah, technobabble. Where would sci-fi be without it? I like Geordi's comment on the talents of the Bridrani and of Rina.

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We do awful things to the characters we love, don't we? This is a fantastically vivid snippet.

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Good work slogging through the edits! I like the rambling feel of this conversation - the way that you're getting across a lot of information very subtly.

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Typical Mycroft - when the universe isn't arranged the way he wants it, he rearranges it!

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Nice work - looking forward to the next snippet.

[saki101.livejournal.com]

Well done! Looking forward to the snippet!

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Well, yeah, I don't always find my notes, either. It's all right as long as they're lying in an untidy heap on the floor next to my bed, but you can't keep them there for years. As soon as I put them away safely, so that I would be able to find them later, a black hole opens and swallows them.

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As Jack Harkness said once, technobabble is good for the soul. *g*

[akane42me.livejournal.com]

A week filled with good times:)

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We did have one long day - rain, rain, nothing but rain. We read all day. It was heavenly:)

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Feeling very refreshed! Which is good, because we've got a very busy week ahead of us!

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I didn't put much effort into accomplishing anything - which was the opposite of my intention! But once we were at the campgrounds, my intentions flew out the window:) We had a lot of fun.

RE: Still on with Terminus

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I like this a lot! And I love technobabble. Always have:)

Excellent progress! Very impressive!

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Very good progress!

the thin, ragged sounds he made that were as faint as a whisper, as piercing and agonized as a scream...
Gulp.

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Very good progress - congrats for finishing edits on two chapters!

Exciting / intriguing leads for Rupert! Thank you, Grandmama:)

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Perfectly Mycroft - getting off a good shot from his trusty umbrella! And I love his nonchalant comment:)

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Good job! And good luck getting back in the swing of things!

[espresso-addict.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

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thank you! Eggs here are usually brown or white too, but it's used to denote a light sky blue colour, which presumably some chicken somewhere lays!

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I think my protag is about as good at making tea as I am :)

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Thanks! All the Chandler immersion seems to have worked. I suspect it's like the worst tea the reader can imagine!

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Thank you! I suspect the institutional tea-making facilities in Earthse are pretty much as poor as they are here...

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Writing every day is such a useful discipline; kudos!

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Back in England I had the heap by the bed, the heap by the chair in the sitting room & the heap by the desk -- unfortunately Mr EA got to pack all but the first...

Re: Still on with Terminus

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I'm glad Rina gets to do something with hir brain, rather than just hir pheromones :) And the technobabble sounds suitably babbly...

Super glad you've managed to excavate your notes on the Cadfael story -- that's always half the battle of restarting these dinosaurs.