http://saki101.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] saki101.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo 2015-06-24 10:04 pm (UTC)

RE: Choices made

I like the way you introduce the fact that Bledri is dead.

Hopefully, it was just the opening that needed three goes before it felt right.
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