(In the right spot now...) Nothing new, but I went back over the last scene and tinkered with the dialogue. A little from the middle-ish bit ~
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“You didn’t call an ambulance?” Sherlock said.
“He was bleeding and the ambulance would not have got to us and on to a hospital as fast as I could bring him here straight,” Sherlock said.
“To where you work,” Sherlock said.
Matron nodded.
“You assumed a risk,” Sherlock noted.
The matron’s posture had relaxed somewhat during the conversation. She drew herself up again at this remark. “To save a life, I would,” she stated and raised her chin.
Sherlock’s eyes flicked from her face to John’s and back.
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“You didn’t call an ambulance?” Sherlock said.
“He was bleeding and the ambulance would not have got to us and on to a hospital as fast as I could bring him here straight,” Sherlock said.
“To where you work,” Sherlock said.
Matron nodded.
“You assumed a risk,” Sherlock noted.
The matron’s posture had relaxed somewhat during the conversation. She drew herself up again at this remark. “To save a life, I would,” she stated and raised her chin.
Sherlock’s eyes flicked from her face to John’s and back.
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