I recall thinking about that when I wrote Red and thought there was something in either that story or Milk that didn't fit. Today I re-read them and didn't see anything contradictory, although maybe it's in the beginning part of this one that I had written before pico started. I need to re-read this draft at some point! I started today, but then had to go out.

It is like the mood of the series is pulling at me here though. Maybe that's a good sign, although perhaps not for this story.