Pico, Day 17

[elmey.livejournal.com]

Here's today's post for your snippets, comments, thoughts.

Comments

[espresso-addict.livejournal.com]

Hurrah for back on trackness! "Are you just a shell filled with whatever your Uncle needs? What do you see when you look in the mirror?" / "...I don't need to look in the mirror to know who I am." is a wonderful exchange.

[elmey.livejournal.com]

I have to admit that this is a leading conversation to set up my ending--if things work out the way I planned.

I really like writing dialogue, probably too much. That's the area where I really have to cut & slash in the final edit.

[espresso-addict.livejournal.com]

That sounds like you are making good progress with your structuring work. It shows that you like writing dialogue -- your dialogue really shines.