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http://elmey.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] elmey.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo2015-07-29 01:05 am
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Pico, Day 29

Here's today's post for your snippets, comments, thoughts.
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[identity profile] elmey.livejournal.com 2015-07-29 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
It is a great first line! And I love the overall tone. You keep throwing out snippets for stories I want to read :)

[identity profile] nineveh-uk.livejournal.com 2015-07-30 05:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I am not sure if it's the tone that it needs, exactly, but it is the tone that is currently feeling as if it could be fun ;-)
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