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Pico, Day 29
Here's today's post for your snippets, comments, thoughts.
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elmey.livejournal.com
2015-07-29 10:43 pm (UTC)
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It is a
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first line! And I love the overall tone. You keep throwing out snippets for stories I want to read :)
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nineveh-uk.livejournal.com
2015-07-30 05:41 pm (UTC)
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Thank you! I am not sure if it's the tone that it needs, exactly, but it is the tone that is currently feeling as if it could be fun ;-)
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