March Pico 2018, Day 5

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Here is the place to talk about your progress (or the lack of it) and share bits with us.
May the magic be with us all!

Comments

[vysila.livejournal.com]

I quite like the little details here, the night officers reporting personally, the swimmer's strokes like a metronome, the way the water churns and smooths out. Sometimes the solution is found in the details, yes?

Is this Waverly?

[elmey.livejournal.com]

Yes, it's Waverly! I like putting the characters in a textured setting, though it's easy to overdo it so much editing ahead.