http://fallingtowers.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] fallingtowers.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo 2009-11-03 08:50 pm (UTC)

And now I've even done some proper writing for today -- about 600 more words!

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Day 3 (http://having-written.livejournal.com/23197.html#cutid3) even takes off where day 2 left me hanging, storywise. Excerpt here:


Among the scenes from the Nativity in the church and the oil-lamps for Nochebuena in the windows, it was so easy to pretend that there was no war going on in the darkness; that the child’s wet, downy hair was her mother’s rich, dark brown instead of an unfamiliar blonde; that Teresa might be a respectable widow or an officer’s wife waiting for her husband to return on furlough and cradle his first-born in his arms.

Antonia was barely three weeks old, however, when Doña Agnes caught her niece showing off the sleeping girl at a New Year’s dinner in an afrancesado’s drawing-room. She had scarcely recognized Teresa’s demeanour on that evening. Partly demure, partly sly, she smiled at the enemy officers in an afrancesada’s drawing-room; she was acting for all the world as though she’d lost her honour to some English brute and was practically begging for the next best handsome sous-lieutenant to throw some money after her and her poor, fatherless child.

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