Day 8

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Here's today's prompt for you to post your updates and any excerpts and thoughts etc in comments.

Comments

[elmey.livejournal.com]

I read your note on rewriting, it sounds a lot like your craft has improved and you're finding better solutions to the problems that stumped you while being able to stay with your original inspiration.
I like the detail of the real coffee in the real cups and saucers.

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I love being able to add in little details that tell more than big chunks of exposition.