So of course Bryce is going to say something very witty or silly. :-)
The hulking First Officer was standing behind him like a wall ready to fall on him.
I Love this! I know you don't like doing physcial descriptions, but that is great!
That of Garvin needs to be less obvious though. How about something like: Garvin Anders, a tall, blond man, had a penchant for the ladies and a good ale, so they got on well. That puts the emphasis on his likes, rather than his looks. Otherwise it seems as if Bryce likes him for his appearance.
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The hulking First Officer was standing behind him like a wall ready to fall on him.
I Love this! I know you don't like doing physcial descriptions, but that is great!
That of Garvin needs to be less obvious though. How about something like:
Garvin Anders, a tall, blond man, had a penchant for the ladies and a good ale, so they got on well.
That puts the emphasis on his likes, rather than his looks. Otherwise it seems as if Bryce likes him for his appearance.
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