ext_6892 ([identity profile] sallymn.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo 2009-11-29 10:06 am (UTC)

That's very well done, managing to get a lot of atmosphere and tension through the scraps and torn bits of dialogue.

And I love the image "like a mountainous mother hen." :)

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