http://saki101.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] saki101.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo 2012-07-03 06:58 pm (UTC)

There was a sudden crack and the notes in his head shattered.

I like shattered, it's implies both violence and fragility, and I want to run after the daydream and hear more about that memory.

(Sorry about the deletion. I put the comment in the wrong place.

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