ext_41457 ([identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo2012-07-03 09:19 am

Day 3 (Team July)

Here is the post to update with any extracts, thoughts, or comments you might have for today.

Keep the fires burning!

(Considering the temperatures we're currently having over here, I expect spontaneous self-combusting on my part. *sighs*)

[identity profile] saki101.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 06:26 am (UTC)(link)
I like how Maurice's self-critique is mixed with his critique of the poet as poet, as man and as social tool and how the frame of the observations about Lucia eating gives the timeframe (I'm thinking all that passed through Maurice's mind between bites). His ruminations convey so much information about Maurice and his society so succinctly!

[identity profile] ideealisme.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 07:21 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, thank you :)