ext_41457 ([identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo2012-07-03 09:19 am

Day 3 (Team July)

Here is the post to update with any extracts, thoughts, or comments you might have for today.

Keep the fires burning!

(Considering the temperatures we're currently having over here, I expect spontaneous self-combusting on my part. *sighs*)

[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
That's great, that crack on the window bringing Illya out of it. And whatever he's remembering from the Volksoper, that sounds intriguing. I love the detail of brushing at his damp jacket, and the agitated sweep of the violins. Excellent description.

Writing out of sequence, dealing with a big lumpy mess... we are cut of the same cloth.