Day Twenty-Four

[altariel.livejournal.com]

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[six-old-cars.livejournal.com]

After Thursday's minimal effort I added another 500 or so, bringing chapter 5 to 3850 words.

I think scene 5 is getting a bit ahead of itself, though. It may be introducing some plot twists that I want to hold off on for another chapter. But I guess that can be corrected in the second draft.

So this was how it would be, Michael realised. Even at the height of his most severe disagreements with the bishop, Michael had not believed he would flatly refuse to explain his reasons, nor demand unquestioning obedience so diametrically opposed to the search for knowledge that was central to the Remembrance faith.

[espresso-addict.livejournal.com]

You're really trouncing your expectations here, aren't you? As to plot twists, even if you need to move them later, you may well find the material can be cut and pasted. Or perhaps you'll come up with more plot twists for the later chapter.

[altariel.livejournal.com]

Very cool that you're thinking forwards to chapter 6.