Sleep is definitely good, and it's clearly had a positive effect on your word count! A nice snippet with some great intrigue.
Provking us, period. Apart from the typo, I'm not sure about the word "period" here - to me it feels very current-day-American and out of keeping with the setting (though not knowing the fandom it may be a perfectly acceptable anachronism).
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on 2014-11-22 10:55 pm (UTC)Provking us, period.
Apart from the typo, I'm not sure about the word "period" here - to me it feels very current-day-American and out of keeping with the setting (though not knowing the fandom it may be a perfectly acceptable anachronism).