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ext_27872 ([identity profile] el-staplador.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo2015-06-19 06:22 am

Pico day 19

Here is the post for any comments, snippets or thoughts.

May the magic be with us all!

Terminus, Chapter 9

[identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com 2015-06-19 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, we are seriously flagging, folks! Or has everyone gone to their well-deserved holidays? Well, I certainly have. We've finished the term today. As a way of celebrating, I wrote 6 pages of Chapter 9 today, which I'm planning to type up tomorrow. So, today's snippet still comes from Chapter 8.

Excerpt:

“And it has just reached the edge of a galactic sector that is densely populated with such life forms,” Dr Crusher whispered in horror. “Oh God, how can we stop it before it performs mass genocide?”

“We can’t,” Worf announced darkly. “We don’t have the means to do so.”


Re: Terminus, Chapter 9

[identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com 2015-06-19 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, you beat me to it! I hope your holidays are very productive for writing.

You've got to the cliffhanger climax! Aie! Is the Federation going to be destroyed? Tune back after the ad break... :) I keep thinking of that crystal matrix thing that threatened Dr Soong's home -- or am I way off base?

[identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com 2015-06-19 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
It's just Worf being himself, actually. ;)

RE: Terminus, Chapter 9

[identity profile] saki101.livejournal.com 2015-06-19 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Congratulations, you survived!! What a productive celebration, too!

That's an ominous snip there!

[identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com 2015-06-19 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
When Worf, then it's doom and gloom. ;)

RE: Terminus, Chapter 9

[identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com 2015-06-20 06:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, I know I'm evil. *g*
But it's 3rd Season TNG, so you can be sure that they'll find a way out of the crisis. They always did in the early seasons.

RE: Terminus, Chapter 9

[identity profile] stevie-carroll.livejournal.com 2015-06-20 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I've had a busy weekend so far, and there's a lot of tension packed into that short snippet.

RE: Terminus, Chapter 9

[identity profile] sallymn.livejournal.com 2015-06-21 10:51 am (UTC)(link)
Eeep! That's a wonderfully grim spot they're in...

Re: Terminus, Chapter 9

[identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com 2015-06-21 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehe! I like my boys in a tight space. Keeps them on their toes, it does.

RE: Terminus, Chapter 9

[identity profile] jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com 2015-06-23 12:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Terrifying snippet! Hopefully they'll find a way to prevent it!