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http://elmey.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] elmey.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo2015-07-28 01:05 am
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Pico, Day 28

Here's today's post for your snippets, comments, thoughts.
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[identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com 2015-07-29 01:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Editing, plotty thinking and words, even if not directly usable, all sound like excellent progress, kudos! I like Sherlock being concerned about quality controls, for once, and the last line is perfect.

[identity profile] saki101.livejournal.com 2015-07-29 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I think I have to let that be the end of that scene. It still makes me smile to re-read it.
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