Pico, Day 28

[elmey.livejournal.com]

Here's today's post for your snippets, comments, thoughts.

Comments

[espresso-addict.livejournal.com]

Editing, plotty thinking and words, even if not directly usable, all sound like excellent progress, kudos! I like Sherlock being concerned about quality controls, for once, and the last line is perfect.

[saki101.livejournal.com]

I think I have to let that be the end of that scene. It still makes me smile to re-read it.