ext_41457 ([identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo2019-07-10 06:39 pm
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July 2019 - Day 10

Here is the place to tell us about your daily success (or the lack of it)!

May the magic be with us all!

[identity profile] spikesgirl58.livejournal.com 2019-07-10 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm doing pretty well. I'm up to 1767 words and it feels 'right,' if you know what I mean.


That’s not what happened. The steel of the house sang to him. Frowning, Steel reached out with his other hand.

Tell me what happened

Not how it happened. Trapped.

Who is trapped?

We are. All of us are.


Steel let his hands drop and immediately Sapphire was at his side. “Steel are you all right?”

“The construction of the house disagrees with the official story.”

“I beg your pardon.”

He looked at his hand. “It spoke to me, the steel."

[identity profile] spikesgirl58.livejournal.com 2019-07-10 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Yup, being created from steel, I decided he would be able to communicate with it, just like people communicate with people.

[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com 2019-07-12 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Very good progress! Nice touch there, the steel in the construction speaking to him.

[identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com 2019-07-10 07:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh - that sounds really interesting.

[identity profile] spikesgirl58.livejournal.com 2019-07-10 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I'm having fun.