I struggled with this one in the editing phase but in the end I had to close my eyes and dump two of the scenes. They didn't serve much of a purpose to the plot. I liked them but they slowed down the pace too much. Oh well, maybe I'll save them for another point in the story.
Here's the final version of the scene between Adrian and the Admiral.
Adrian and Kali, Part 13 (http://kalinda001.livejournal.com/324873.html)
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on 2009-11-23 03:18 pm (UTC)I struggled with this one in the editing phase but in the end I had to close my eyes and dump two of the scenes. They didn't serve much of a purpose to the plot. I liked them but they slowed down the pace too much. Oh well, maybe I'll save them for another point in the story.
Here's the final version of the scene between Adrian and the Admiral.
Adrian and Kali, Part 13 (http://kalinda001.livejournal.com/324873.html)