on 2009-11-23 04:01 pm (UTC)
The dialogue seems to be expositioning nicely here - lots of plot coming through. (I think I've got more of a handle on Arthur as a reader now that I know he's really quite young - the para. about him reads potentially quite differently if he's 30 than if he's 18).

I don't know whether I envy the write loads of crap, the gold is hidden inside it method or not.
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