Day 23

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Here's today's prompt for you to post your updates and any excerpts and thoughts etc in comments.

Comments

[kalinda001.livejournal.com]

Good progress.

Love this line:
Zack stared at his breakfast as if it was personally responsible for Rob's lack of communication.

[azdak.livejournal.com]

Zack stared at his breakfast as if it was personally responsible for Rob's lack of communication.

I second the love for this line!

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

:-)

Thanks.

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I'm glad that line worked.