Day 29

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Here's today's prompt for you to post your updates and any excerpts and thoughts etc in comments.

Comments

[sallymn.livejournal.com]

That's very well done, managing to get a lot of atmosphere and tension through the scraps and torn bits of dialogue.

And I love the image "like a mountainous mother hen." :)

[azdak.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm not completely happy with it yet, but it's an awful lot better - and shorter - than it was.