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Kathryn A. ([personal profile] kerravonsen) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo2012-07-04 08:16 pm
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Day 4 (Team July)

Yes, I'm butting in here to post, because it's evening of the 4th here, and there is no post! So join me in the boasting progress reports and encouragement for this day's creative work!

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[identity profile] stevie-carroll.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Very powerful.

[identity profile] stevie-carroll.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 08:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Real Life should know when to quit.

[identity profile] stevie-carroll.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Great work there!

[identity profile] stevie-carroll.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
A sad excerpt indeed. Poor Maurice.

[identity profile] stevie-carroll.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:02 pm (UTC)(link)
A tricky bit of conversation there.

[identity profile] stevie-carroll.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Great inner monologue there, well mixed in with the action.

[identity profile] stevie-carroll.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:04 pm (UTC)(link)
That's still good progress.

[identity profile] stevie-carroll.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Your lot are worse than my lot with the inheritance thing.
kerravonsen: Fiction/Poetry/Art: it's cheaper than therapy (cheaper-than-therapy)

[personal profile] kerravonsen 2012-07-04 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
8-)
kerravonsen: Fiction/Poetry/Art: it's cheaper than therapy (cheaper-than-therapy)

[personal profile] kerravonsen 2012-07-04 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!
kerravonsen: Fiction/Poetry/Art: it's cheaper than therapy (cheaper-than-therapy)

[personal profile] kerravonsen 2012-07-04 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
\o/
kerravonsen: Fiction/Poetry/Art: it's cheaper than therapy (cheaper-than-therapy)

[personal profile] kerravonsen 2012-07-04 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
\o/

[identity profile] jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Hope you have fun rereading, and good luck sorting out the plot holes!

Great description in this - certainly sounds like they are taking all possible precautions!
kerravonsen: Kerr Avon, frowning: Character is PLOT (character-is-plot)

[personal profile] kerravonsen 2012-07-04 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I like this. Poor Illya. And both of them so very careful not to seem emotional.

[identity profile] jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Looks like you are making a lot of progress!

Intriguing... :)

[identity profile] jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor you! It sounds like a really unpleasant situation. Good luck!
kerravonsen: Jack O'Neill: Excuse me? I think you'll find that the number of the SUBJECT determines the number of the VERB. (grammar)

[personal profile] kerravonsen 2012-07-04 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Exciting!
Though I am puzzled by the phrase half in and half out of the ladder because I don't think of ladders as something one can be inside of.
kerravonsen: Jack O'Neill writing a report: "It was a dark and stormy mission..." (writing)

[personal profile] kerravonsen 2012-07-04 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, of course it is progress!

[identity profile] stevie-carroll.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!
kerravonsen: Jack O'Neill writing a report: "It was a dark and stormy mission..." (writing)

[personal profile] kerravonsen 2012-07-04 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
(grin) Ridiculous lengths indeed.
kerravonsen: a gun: "The mind, the first and final battleground. A weapon is a device for making your enemy change his mind." (weapon-change-mind)

[personal profile] kerravonsen 2012-07-04 09:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Covering his tracks, hmmmm?

[identity profile] saki101.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :-D (Down to the last little bit now.)

[identity profile] jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! It all feels related, as I've having to do so much worldbuilding and character building (given the lack of much detail in canon), I guess I should try and fill in the important gaps and then see what feels right from there.

Things are going to be hard for her... but not all bad

[identity profile] jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)

[identity profile] jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com 2012-07-04 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)
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