ext_422737: uncle hallway (0)
http://elmey.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] elmey.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo 2012-07-07 11:36 pm (UTC)

I don't know about the context, but the flow of this is fine; tense and dramatic.
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