I once wrote a story called White Feathers as well :) but the story was incomplete, didn't sound right, and something kept nagging at me. Other people kept sending me links about the whole thing and mentioning it. So...
Hah, yes, good point about the prose. I think I could lose that battle scene I showed you earlier, but I'll see how things go.
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on 2012-07-15 10:32 am (UTC)Hah, yes, good point about the prose. I think I could lose that battle scene I showed you earlier, but I'll see how things go.