Day 29 (Team July)

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

I'm about to go to bed and as there isn't a post for today yet, I thought I'd better put one up. So here's today's prompt for your writing updates and for any extracts, thoughts, or comments you might have.

Comments

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Drat, I forgot to post? Sorry about that. I thought I had made it last night in advance, but apparently, I hadn't. Well, since I'm here already...

Torchwood excerpt:

Jack always loved watching the nanogenes in action. Loved as the tiny machines swarmed around a damaged human body like a cloud of sunlit dust particles, entered it and then left it again, after they’d repaired the damage, dutifully returning to their stasis tube. They were like small sparks, tamed to his hand. Like a healing spell from some fairy tale taking physical form.

[ideealisme.livejournal.com]

What lovely description. Very poetic.

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Thank you. :)

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Oh, the nanogenes!

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Yes, indeedly.

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Wonderfully vivid!

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Thank you. :)

[saki101.livejournal.com]

That's a beautiful and reassuring description.

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Thanks. That's what I was going for: for reassuring. I'm glad it worked.

[espresso-addict.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is a lovely description! The nanogenes were always one of my favourite Whoverse inventions, and they fit very well with the fairy tale analogy.

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I like them, too. They always remind me how the 9th Doctor happily excalimed at the end of the episode: "Everyone lives! For once, everyone lives!"

[espresso-addict.livejournal.com]

That pair of episodes is still my favourite, I think. Though I seem to have deleted my icon from it.

[elmey.livejournal.com]

A lovely description, giving the little machines life.