Day Eight

Nov. 8th, 2006 03:27 pm
[identity profile] altariel.livejournal.com in [community profile] picowrimo
Please post today's updates/excerpts/thoughts/etc. in comments.

Here's today's daily prompt for your updates, excerpts, any thoughts, etc.

Yesterday's post: Day Seven

on 2006-11-08 08:48 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] catskin.livejournal.com
Umm... does anyone have a cure for aching arms and wrists? I haven't been able to do any real typing for the past two days because my right arm and all my fingers are in agony. From too much typing.

Oh the painful irony!

on 2006-11-08 10:59 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
Do you use your mouse in the right hand? I've found switching it to the left alleviates RSI-type pain.

on 2006-11-08 11:31 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] six-old-cars.livejournal.com
Although some people (ok, I) find that switching the mouse to the left hand merely results in complete loss of mouse control. Ambidextrous I definitely am not.

The hot water bottle is a good idea.

on 2006-11-09 12:39 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
It helps if you use a symmetric mouse. I first started getting RSI back in the early 90s, so I suppose I've got used to the get-rounds by now. Since my last paralysing bout of the stuff, I've kept a mouse on the left & a touchpad on the right, and make sure that I use both roughly equally.

on 2006-11-08 11:37 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] six-old-cars.livejournal.com
OK, since I need to keep plugging away at writing or I'll stop, I'm going to make sure I post a total every day to shame me into doing so.

Today's grand total is 2675, a delta of "only" 200, which I would have been pleased with only a week ago but looks rather underachieving compared to yesterday. Never mind, it's another scene completed, making me 3 of 7 already. At this rate I may need to start planning chapter 5 soon!

Extract of the day:
Was he getting paranoid? Did his feelings of guilt about his recent actions make him see danger where there was none? The priests saw the Record frequently, and there was nothing incriminating in it anyway.

on 2006-11-09 12:42 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
I'm finding the post-every-day mentality is really helping me to keep up the momentum. It sounds like you're making steady progress, which is brilliant! Roll on chapter 5!

on 2006-11-09 12:46 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
And doesn't that mean you've just crossed the halfway mark? I'd say that's an excellent excuse to celebrate!

on 2006-11-09 09:29 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] six-old-cars.livejournal.com
It's past half-way against the original target figure (yay!), but I had set out to write a chapter and I'm not quite half way against the plan. I'm expecting the chapter to come out around 6000 rather than 5000. Of course, my current word count puts me on target to hit that well before end of month, so my unofficial goal is to get "a decent start" made on chapter 5 too.

on 2006-11-09 10:25 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
Seems to give a good excuse for celebrating in 500 words time, too ;)

on 2006-11-09 12:32 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
Today = net 452, which isn't as good as yesterday, but does include a lot of licking yesterday's scene into shape.

That’ll be Ferdy. Left him managing the luggage at the York. He insisted on putting up there, kept going on about singing, of all things! You know how he is when he takes some hare-brained notion into his head, best to humour him.’

Gil passed over the insult to his friend, for the first time taking in the import of Sherry’s somewhat crumpled attire. ‘Don’t mean to say you tooled down
overnight?’ he enquired, incredulously.

on 2006-11-09 10:54 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
As I said, I don't know the characters, but I love the languid upper-class wit here.

on 2006-11-09 09:26 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
Thanks! The boys are great fun to write.

on 2006-11-09 02:51 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] tawek.livejournal.com
espresso_addict quoted:
Gil passed over the insult to his friend, for the first time taking in the import of Sherry’s somewhat crumpled attire. ‘Don’t mean to say you tooled down overnight?’ he enquired, incredulously.

Wow! You don't mean to say you've got a major character called Gil. I do too :)

on 2006-11-09 09:24 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
Gil's the hero of the piece -- but then I'm borrowing my characters from Ms Heyer, so I can't take all the credit ;)

on 2006-11-09 04:33 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quietann.livejournal.com
word count 2025

"These days, my value is in my name," Donna sighed. Then, figuring that by reputation, the last thing Ivan would want to do was marry her, she explained, "If my brother doesn't marry and produce a Count's heir in the usual way, his brother-in-law would be an obvious choice to succeed him."

"That's... that's obscene! You're not his property!"

on 2006-11-09 10:27 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
Well done for passing another milestone!

on 2006-11-09 10:55 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
I do look forward to this. Will we also see Dono?

on 2006-11-09 05:30 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quietann.livejournal.com
Well, this takes place about 20 years before Dono, so probably not. But there are hints of the social conditions that cause Donna to become Dono.

For my view on all this, well, I'm pimping my own fanfic here, but see this: http://www.lse.org/~quietann/donna.html

on 2006-11-09 07:13 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
I'm amazed that so many women put up with Barrayar society. It's probably the thing I like the least about the novels--sexist societies are so cliched in SF; even Farscape did an ep (and why didn't they twist it so it was the men who were possessions, eh?). But LMB gets away with it with all those strong and undefeated women.

Ooh. About to go to work, but I'll read that story at lunchtime. :-)

on 2006-11-10 09:53 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
Brava! That's very believable as canon we didn't get to read, and there was Gregor being quietly perceptive and amused, and By-ness too!

on 2006-11-10 09:03 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quietann.livejournal.com
thank you! **blush**

I'm still pretty new to fanfic, but I think that story is one of my better efforts so far.

There's considerably more Bujold fic at (not surprisingly) [livejournal.com profile] bujold_fic. The biggest deal is novel-length Gregor/Miles slash (A Deeper Season, see http://lookingglass.lightgetsin.com/ads01.html), but [livejournal.com profile] tales_of_josan did a really nice series recently, I am helping [livejournal.com profile] jetta_e_rus with editing a translation of a Russian Illyan/Aral slash novella It's a Long Way to Escobar, and there was a Bujold ficathon earlier this year which is indexed at http://community.livejournal.com/bujold_fic/16423.html ...

on 2006-11-11 12:38 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
Yes, I saw the ficathon. I shall have to check out the other links; thanks! Aral is a good character for slash given that he's canonically bi.

on 2006-11-11 01:04 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quietann.livejournal.com
oh, um, and, the "Novella That Ate My Life" is Ges/Aral... lots of story and a little bit of sometimes-twisted sex. I don't write pr0n though...

on 2006-11-11 02:06 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
Oh, good, 'cause I'm not keen on it myself. Do you have that posted anywhere?

on 2006-11-11 04:08 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quietann.livejournal.com
Well, it's not done yet! I am trying to finish it before [livejournal.com profile] lightgetsin and [livejournal.com profile] sahiya post the sequel to A Deeper Season, because their stuff is just so completely better than anything I or anyone else out there could write...

But I have posted excerpts (drafts of scenes, really) at:

http://community.livejournal.com/bujold_fic/19636.html
http://community.livejournal.com/bujold_fic/22557.html
http://community.livejournal.com/bujold_fic/27356.html

There is a little bit of R or NC-17 material in the first, just so you know.

on 2006-11-11 04:43 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
I wouldn't call any of those drafts. :-) And Ges is so likable here!

Blush again!

on 2006-11-11 11:45 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quietann.livejournal.com
Ges does start out likeable. But I have added things to show that even at the beginning, he's a bit deviant beyond just liking boys...

on 2006-11-09 10:47 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
Excerpt:
"Ah." Hairy alien. Always knew I'd meet one. "Um, pleased to meet you."

"And I you." She smiled at me with a mouth full of pointy little teeth, and still managed to look friendly even though she should've looked more frightening then Avon doing his crocodile look. "You're a son of Adam--"

"Eh?" I blinked. "Never knew who my father was, sorry."

"--and you're too light-skinned to be a Telmarine--"

"I've never told anything to a marine, but then again, I've always heard they're a bit sceptical."

"--or a Calormene, so I thought you'd be safe to talk to."

on 2006-11-09 04:09 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] greenlily.livejournal.com
Yay, Narnia vs snark! More please. :)

--[livejournal.com profile] missiondoll

on 2006-11-09 07:06 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
Vila won't be impressed with what he's expected to do either. When I get to that bit, I'll post it here.

on 2006-11-09 09:28 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
Hairy aliens! Yay! I'm so looking forward to reading the whole story.

on 2006-11-09 10:10 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
Well, talking animals and a reluctant hero who'd rather rob royalty than save them. :-) This is going to be a lot longer than 5000 words. I'm not even sure what's happening till I write it. I'm tempted to add Bacchus but then Vila would never leave.

on 2006-11-10 12:31 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
It will get so long!

on 2006-11-10 12:46 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
And this is a problem? The challenge is to work out why Vila would have to leave, and how he can both rob & save royalty at the same time :)

on 2006-11-11 05:13 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] forodwaith.livejournal.com
I don't know the other half of this crossover at all, but I'm still getting a huge kick out of it.

on 2006-11-11 05:33 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com
Thanks! It's Blake's 7, a British SF series from 25 or so years ago which I fell for in 2001 when I saw reruns.

And argh! I just noticed a typo. i must fix that in the story.

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