Well... to be honest, today, I've just spent a number of hours collating other critiques, and tidying up that chapter 1. I suppose I shouldn't really be doing that when I'm not ahead of the game with Pico ... but I wanted to make changes while all the feedback was in my head... You know how it is ;)
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ninetydegrees
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on 2006-11-12 10:46 pm (UTC)