Day Eleven

[altariel.livejournal.com]

Please post today's updates/excerpts/thoughts/etc. in comments.

Here's today's daily prompt for your updates, excerpts, any thoughts, etc.

Yesterday's post: Day Ten

Comments

[tawek.livejournal.com]

Well... to be honest, today, I've just spent a number of hours collating other critiques, and tidying up that chapter 1. I suppose I shouldn't really be doing that when I'm not ahead of the game with Pico ... but I wanted to make changes while all the feedback was in my head... You know how it is ;)