Managed to stay on target today with 354 words, and though the story still hasn't completely gelled in my head it has a bit more shape to it.
The city looked more prosperous than she remembered; but then as a child she had been more interested in the dusty pebbles discovered along the roadside than in the gilded roof of the sanctuary.
Another 200 words on my Yuletide story too, bringing it to 1900 words. I think I've even figured out the ending!?!
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on 2006-11-16 04:40 am (UTC)The city looked more prosperous than she remembered; but then as a child she had been more interested in the dusty pebbles discovered along the roadside than in the gilded roof of the sanctuary.
Another 200 words on my Yuletide story too, bringing it to 1900 words. I think I've even figured out the ending!?!
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on 2006-11-16 10:45 am (UTC)Virtual celebratory drinks all round :)
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on 2006-11-17 02:46 pm (UTC)I like that. It seems very true.