Thank you! I'm relieved the voice sounds to be working.
The bridging passage is a pain because it's been loaded with developing one OC, introducing another who appears later, fixing two or three plot points, and doing some location description. No wonder it's sinking under the strain & taking me with it!
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on 2015-06-11 02:07 pm (UTC)The bridging passage is a pain because it's been loaded with developing one OC, introducing another who appears later, fixing two or three plot points, and doing some location description. No wonder it's sinking under the strain & taking me with it!