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May the magic be with us all!

on 2015-06-11 12:16 am (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] elmey.livejournal.com
You really have the voice down. And it works for the story. I agree with working on scenes that excite you, especially when you're trying to get back into this piece. I've noticed that in the end, I often need a lot less detailed bridging than I thought.

on 2015-06-11 02:07 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm relieved the voice sounds to be working.

The bridging passage is a pain because it's been loaded with developing one OC, introducing another who appears later, fixing two or three plot points, and doing some location description. No wonder it's sinking under the strain & taking me with it!

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