Having one of those days where most of the sentences sound like, "See Spot run." Deciding to ignore that, I finished the latest scene in the Jaguar. There will be much re-writing in the future.
*** A wind rustled the paper. Alistair shut the windows and lowered the partition. “You should probably come up here before I open any more doors.” Alistair twisted around to look in the backseat.
Red scratched at the pink newspaper on the floor and stepped off it.
Alistair wrinkled his nose. “Good I have another copy of that.”
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A wind rustled the paper. Alistair shut the windows and lowered the partition. “You should probably come up here before I open any more doors.” Alistair twisted around to look in the backseat.
Red scratched at the pink newspaper on the floor and stepped off it.
Alistair wrinkled his nose. “Good I have another copy of that.”
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on 2015-06-11 12:19 am (UTC)Wouldn't you know Mycroft reads the Financial Times :) I'm enjoying how matter-of-factly Alistair is talking to Red.
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