Pico, Day 8

[elmey.livejournal.com]

Here's today's post for your snippets,comments, thought.

Comments

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Editing often seems to be like that! Maybe the length isn't as much of an issue as you think?

Intriguing snippet! I'm really curious about what he's sneaking around for.

[espresso-addict.livejournal.com]

Thank you! The next day's snippet follows broadly on from this.

I've decided not to worry too much about the bloat till I've actually got a complete first draft. At the rate I'm proceeding, that'll be sometime in the next millennium...

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

That sounds like a good plan. Hopefully progress will improve!