Pico, Day 28

[elmey.livejournal.com]

Here's today's post for your snippets, comments, thoughts.

Comments

[sallymn.livejournal.com]

Oh yes, I'm glad too - it's always awful when you reread something and don't like it as much as when you wrote it...

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Sadly, it is common for it not to read well for me (although later it may seem better or at least fixable). Thank you.