ext_41457 ([identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo2016-07-11 11:01 am

July Pico, Day 11

Here is today's post for your progress report, snippets and thoughts.

May the magic be with us all!
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[identity profile] elmey.livejournal.com 2016-07-11 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Trying to get back in the groove after a lazy weekend! Managed a little over 300 words before I was interrupted. No snippet because they're really first draft words mapping out a scene with bits of dialogue and bits of description. But I'm pleased enough to be feeling my way back into writing this piece.

I also need to spend time today to beta a story I was asked to look at. I agreed in a moment of high energy--I usually try to accommodate people who need betas but this is over twenty thousand words so it's really going to take some time and the energy seems to be fading as the story sits here before me ;)
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[identity profile] el-staplador.livejournal.com 2016-07-11 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Eek - sounds like a mammoth job! Good luck!

[identity profile] spikesgirl58.livejournal.com 2016-07-11 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Yikes, 20,000 words? You are a brave and wonderful beta! *hugs*

[identity profile] sallymn.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 10:05 am (UTC)(link)
Good on you for agreeing to beta, it's often daunting... but so helpful.

[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Good progress, 300 words! I hope the beta-ing is going well - that's a long story - and that your energy level rises again as you get into the story!
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RE: A somewhat useless day

[identity profile] el-staplador.livejournal.com 2016-07-11 08:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, a paragraph is a paragraph.

I know the feeling re. betas.

RE: A somewhat useless day

[identity profile] spikesgirl58.livejournal.com 2016-07-11 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Have you ever tried to write backwards? it sounds a bit odd, but I've used that to shake the Muse lose a time or two.

I can't believe that you aren't a native English speaker - seriously, you handle the language better than I do. perhaps she was being too helpful.

RE: A somewhat useless day

[identity profile] sallymn.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 10:04 am (UTC)(link)
You have written. That is the main thing.

And i do understand about the feeling of seeing all the corrections... I consider my English good (have an honours degree in it) but the number of typos/spelling mistakes/grammar glitches/just plain stuff ups (and what a beta once called "impressionistic punctuation"...sometimes makes me wonder where my connection with the language went, if I ever had one...

RE: A somewhat useless day

[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 05:03 pm (UTC)(link)
The main thing is that you have done some writing. Keep kicking away at that plot! Something's going to give!

A mug of strong wine tea is in order before you tackle the multi-hued beta. Good luck!
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[identity profile] el-staplador.livejournal.com 2016-07-11 08:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Another three pages of longhand. I have a shedload to type up, but I've got a day off to do it in tomorrow.

[identity profile] spikesgirl58.livejournal.com 2016-07-11 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Can't wait to read some of what you've written!

[identity profile] sallymn.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 10:00 am (UTC)(link)
I'm impressed... I haven't actually written in pen and ink for, oh ages (edited yes, but written? - and my handwriting is even worse than it was...)

[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent progress! Good for you! Happy typing:)

[identity profile] spikesgirl58.livejournal.com 2016-07-11 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm back, I'm back! Such an adventure. I can deal without electricity, but no having running water was tough. And I wrote! :D

4800 words or thereabouts - three stories and a long journal entry - life is good... especially after a hot shower.

[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Holy moley, that's awesome! Welcome back!
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[identity profile] el-staplador.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 05:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent work! Hope you're enjoying being back in civilisation.

[identity profile] sallymn.livejournal.com 2016-07-11 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)

400 words today, of the dialogue between White Collar's conman Neal Caffery and Stargate's Jack O'Neill...

"Remind me why I volunteered to be seen in public with what looks like an explosion in a 1980s Christmas kitsch store on my head?"

"Height of fashion among the aliens where we're goin'."

Neal sighed plaintively. "Then it is very clear that humans are the only race with what could be called taste in the entire galaxy. Some humans," he added, casting a jaundiced eye over O'Neill's ill-fitting jeans and yellow windbreaker. "Don't you have a linguist of two who could pretend to be - what did your P.R. inexpert call them? - 'The Evil Enslaver of the Galaxy' - for a day?"



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[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com 2016-07-11 11:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Started the day with some *cough, cough* research - watching an MFU episode! But really, it WAS research! Verifying a couple of story-related bits based on the episode!

I got a good amount of time in working on the story. One full hour, plus bits and more bits throughout the day.

One baby robin has flown the coop. One left. I predict tomorrow will be the day. It had better launch early morning, because tomorrow promises to be very hot.

[identity profile] sallymn.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 09:57 am (UTC)(link)
Of course it's research {looks shifty at one's own eveningin front of the TV...}

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[identity profile] ylla.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 10:22 am (UTC)(link)
I've been away on holiday, and I haven't made any words at all (I made lots of knitting instead). I've got things to catch up on now, though, and I would like to write some fic this month...

[identity profile] spikesgirl58.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Good luck! I'm sure you will get some writing done!

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[identity profile] sallymn.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Spent much of the day writing... umm, instructions to How To Do Stuff At Work :(

Oh, and helping a friend with her resume )mostly editing and thinking of extra achievements she can put on there without actually fibbing :)

[identity profile] spikesgirl58.livejournal.com 2016-07-12 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, that's not a bad way to spend the day. A woman does not live by play alone.