I have had a good day :) I have finished the chapter of the WIP — I did about 1,100 words this afternoon and revised some of what I'd already done, and the chapter comes in at around 3.750 words. Now to pass it to my beta.
Here is a bit focussing on Spike -
Spike looked deeply into the wine glass. As the contents caught the light he was reminded of blood. Blood drunk from a similar glass, from a mug, on Weetabix… or straight from the neck of the victim, still pulsing out until their heart realised the situation was hopeless. And yet Maedhros believed he, Spike, should be free to go and live in the outside world, see the stars, feel the sun, see Dawnie… but not himself.
That's it exactly! All the bits of conversations, and the points of the argument suddenly fell into order and made a logical whole. It is so good when it fits together like that!
Thank you! Back in the original series it was mentioned that Spike ate Weetabix with blood on, so I can't really take credit for the idea — just for remembering to use it in the right place.
Not much done today, just some "thinking". Got my booster shot and have been lazing around the rest of the day just on principle ;) No bad effects so far and I suppose I should rouse myself and make dinner.
Still working on the same little ramble (I can't yet call it a story) of Two People and a Death Worm On Legs, I did some more descriptions for the ancient and mildly Lovecraftian city they are still on the outskirts of which made about 440 words (gove or take, because I keep changing and/or scrubbing bits). I also chased up some Important Visual Aids aka pictures off google :)
One thing about adapting/changing fannish characters into one's own characters for a story... one can happily bash write a fanon favourite I personally can't stand as I see him without feeling like I'm bashing upsetting people who love the fanon :) Not that he's more than passingly mentioned, but still... these versions are mine all mine (and I'm still thinking of names, for them, for the Death Worm On Legs, for the city... happy sigh)
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on 2021-11-19 08:15 pm (UTC)Here is a bit focussing on Spike -
Spike looked deeply into the wine glass. As the contents caught the light he was reminded of blood. Blood drunk from a similar glass, from a mug, on Weetabix… or straight from the neck of the victim, still pulsing out until their heart realised the situation was hopeless. And yet Maedhros believed he, Spike, should be free to go and live in the outside world, see the stars, feel the sun, see Dawnie… but not himself.
Tough one.
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on 2021-11-20 04:01 am (UTC)Did figure out what the next essay will be about. Probably. lol
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