Day 8

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Here's today's prompt for you to post your updates and any excerpts and thoughts etc in comments.

Comments

[azdak.livejournal.com]

Ah, life off-base. It sounds as if Zoe has a pretty hard life, holding down two jobs and keeping an eye out for her baby brother. Since this is a story - and since there's a Railway Children influence - I'm clinging to the hope that her dad will come back eventually :-)

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

:-)

Since this is a story - and since there's a Railway Children influence - I'm clinging to the hope that her dad will come back eventually

Now that would be telling ;-)