Day 29

[vilakins.livejournal.com]

Here's today's prompt for you to post your updates and any excerpts and thoughts etc in comments.

Comments

[azdak.livejournal.com]

I like this a lot. Breaking the law suddenly becomes much harder if you don't want innocents to suffer as a result.

Who is Mr Chastable? Someone who's been kind to them?

[tawek.livejournal.com]

That's right. They were in a scene I added to part 1. They were necessary to give the characters a reason not to be totally cynical.

It's a tough world, but not everyone is corrupt and malevolent :-)