Day 3 (Team July)

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Here is the post to update with any extracts, thoughts, or comments you might have for today.

Keep the fires burning!

(Considering the temperatures we're currently having over here, I expect spontaneous self-combusting on my part. *sighs*)

Comments

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Heirs and Graces

Phase 3 -- July's writing:



Only a few more words today, but I also wrote another blog post (this time for Friday) and at work I finally finished the first draft copy for a 15k word booklet.

Reynard and Jones are still facing up to each other:

"I hope that thing's not loaded. You could do someone a nasty injury waving it about like that."

"That's the general idea." Jones took another two steps forwards, and pressed the gun to Reynard's head. He spoke softly. "See I know where you've been. I know who you've been talking to. People won't like that, if I tell them."

"What I know," Reynard said, as Jones very efficiently relieved him of his own gun, and two of his knives. "Is that it's a hanging offence if you pull that trigger."

"Who's going to care about scum like us? I kill you, that's one less villain on the streets. You think they'll care about one minor snitch, when there's bigger crimes they could be solving?"

[ideealisme.livejournal.com]

Jones, you'd better pull that trigger quick - we all know what happens to villains who explain at length how they're going to kill their victims :)

Good, action-filled scene.

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

And we all know how hopeless villains are at taking advice too.

Thanks.

[saki101.livejournal.com]

You have been very productive on many fronts!

Is a deal between villains about to be struck?

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

Something's about to be struck.

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Sounds like you've been very productive!

Good scene - very convincingly nasty

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Thanks on both counts.

[muninnhuginn]

That's progress on a lot of fronts!

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[elmey.livejournal.com]

Good tense scene! Two of his knives.... hmmm.

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm glad someone spotted that bit.

[akane42me.livejournal.com]

I love weaselly Jones. Speaking so softly while he threatens Reynard. But Jones is about to get his comeuppance, methinks...

And good progress writing on other projects!

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Thanks. Jones may have picked on the wrong villain here.